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2016-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Write an essay. Pick two crayons at random. What thoughts/feelings do two color stir up in you? I will select red and yellow. The two colors are autumn leaves colors. People go to the mountain for maple-tree viewing nowadays. Colorful mountains are very beautiful. It seems like painting stirring up two colors. It seems like intensive and vivid touch of Vincent Van Gogh.

강사 첨삭

Hi Hwa Shin! Good evening! ^^   This is really cool! ^^ You also have an artistic side. I\'m also a nature lover, so I also have a deep appreciation of the beauty of nature. Good job on these essay dear! ^^ See you!   Teacher Glenda     Here are my corrections: Write an essay. Pick two crayons at random. What thoughts/feelings do two color stir up in you?I will select red and yellow. >> CorrectThe two colors are autumn leaves colors. >> CorrectPeople go to the mountain for maple-tree viewing nowadays. >> Correct or >> Nowadays, people go to the mountain for maple-tree viewing.Colorful mountains are very beautiful. >> Correct It seems like painting stirring up two colors. >> It seems like a painting stirring up two colors.It seems like intensive and vivid touch of Vincent Van Gogh. >> Correct.

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