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2016-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Teacher SOPHIA We left a few days of October! Its so fast. Anyway we talk about illust last time.So I want to tell you how did I like it. Lst year, after I get a entrance on fine art master, I was fed up about fine art. Because when I was a university student, I have a only noe goal 'TO ENTRANCE ON MASTER' hole 4 years, and finally I achieved a goal. And then, I felt so weried as I lose a during 4 years goal, So I was skeptical about fine art. After, by accidently I saw a Anthony Browne's display. Who was famouse on illustration. I was so surprised about his work and I feil in love with illust since then. haha After I love all art again, so illust is special for me. p.s: And you can find a nice place. 1.Although She wasn't~ 2. He left early.so that~ 3.Provided You can go out~ 4.Even if I don't ~ 5.Take a sandwich in case~ 6.Despite there was ~ 7. Sue likes Opera whereas~ 8.Even though the weather ~ 9.In spite of he had the 'flu~ 10. Unless you have to put the alarm on.~

강사 첨삭

HELLO SUNNY,

Thank you for giving me info about illustrative painting. 

I hope I can see one of your illustrative painitngs or works. 

Thank you for doing your homework.

Have a nice ahead.

Teacher Sophia 

Here are your corrections:

Teacher SOPHIA

>> 
We left a few days of October! Its so fast.

>> October is almost over.
Anyway we talk about illust last time.So I want to tell you how did I like it.

>> Anyway, we were talking about illustrative painting last time so I want to tell you the reason why I like it.
Lst year, after I get a entrance on fine art master, I was fed up about fine art.

>> I was fed up about fine art.
Because when I was a university student, I have a only noe goal \'TO ENTRANCE ON MASTER\' hole 4 years, and finally I achieved a goal.

>> My ultimate goal when I was a university student is to finish my masters degree.
And then, I felt so weried as I lose a during 4 years goal, So I was skeptical about fine art.

>> I felt weird about achieving my goal so I became skeptical about fine art.
After, by accidently I saw a Anthony Browne\'s display. Who was famouse on illustration.

>> Fortunately, I saw Anthony Browne\'s illustrative paintings.
I was so surprised about his work and I feil in love with illust since then. haha

>> I was so amazed about his work that I fell in love with his illustrative designs.  
After I love all art again, so illust is special for me.

>> That\'s the reason why I love art again because of his illustrative designs.
p.s: And you can find a nice place.

>> By the way, have you already found a nice place?

Here are your answers:

1.Although She wasn\'t~

>> CORRECT 
2. He left early.so that~

>>  CORRECT 
3.Provided You can go out~

>>  You can go out tonight provided you tell us where you are going.
4.Even if I don\'t ~

>>  CORRECT 
5.Take a sandwich in case~

>>  CORRECT 
6.Despite there was ~

>>  Despite the noise, he managed to sleep.
7. Sue likes Opera whereas~

>>  CORRECT 
8.Even though the weather ~

>>   CORRECT 
9.In spite of he had the \'flu~

>>  In spite of having the \'flu he went to work.
10. Unless you have to put the alarm on.

>>  Unless you put the alarm on it won\'t work.



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