Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HELLO SUNNY,
Thank you for giving me info about illustrative painting.
I hope I can see one of your illustrative painitngs or works.
Thank you for doing your homework.
Have a nice ahead.
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Teacher SOPHIA
>>
We left a few days of October! Its so fast.
>> October is almost over.
Anyway we talk about illust last time.So I want to tell you how did I like it.
>> Anyway, we were talking about illustrative painting last time so I want to tell you the reason why I like it.
Lst year, after I get a entrance on fine art master, I was fed up about fine art.
>> I was fed up about fine art.
Because when I was a university student, I have a only noe goal \'TO ENTRANCE ON MASTER\' hole 4 years, and finally I achieved a goal.
>> My ultimate goal when I was a university student is to finish my masters degree.
And then, I felt so weried as I lose a during 4 years goal, So I was skeptical about fine art.
>> I felt weird about achieving my goal so I became skeptical about fine art.
After, by accidently I saw a Anthony Browne\'s display. Who was famouse on illustration.
>> Fortunately, I saw Anthony Browne\'s illustrative paintings.
I was so surprised about his work and I feil in love with illust since then. haha
>> I was so amazed about his work that I fell in love with his illustrative designs.
After I love all art again, so illust is special for me.
>> That\'s the reason why I love art again because of his illustrative designs.
p.s: And you can find a nice place.
>> By the way, have you already found a nice place?
Here are your answers:
1.Although She wasn\'t~
>> CORRECT
2. He left early.so that~
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CORRECT
3.Provided You can go out~
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You can go out tonight provided you tell us where you are going.
4.Even if I don\'t ~
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CORRECT
5.Take a sandwich in case~
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CORRECT
6.Despite there was ~
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Despite the noise, he managed to sleep.
7. Sue likes Opera whereas~
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CORRECT
8.Even though the weather ~
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CORRECT
9.In spite of he had the \'flu~
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In spite of having the \'flu he went to work.
10. Unless you have to put the alarm on.
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Unless you put the alarm on it won\'t work.
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