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When I was a child, I used to have meals without meat and fish because they were very rare and expensive.
Most parents could not afford to provide meat and fish to their offspring.
Animal protein and fat for me could be obtained from only broken eggs and sick chickens less than once a month, although my family grew not a few chickens.
Children with furuncles and boils on the faces were not rarely seen at that time, which caused to poke fun at them.
It is explicable that the phenomena stemmed from their lack of essential nutrition.
A vegetarian diet has already permeated our lives in our community.
Many claim that a vegetarian diet significantly improves one's health.
Buddhist temples have developed some discernible ways to cook their foods without meat, fish and even spicy seasonings.
Generally speaking, monks tend to be hale and hearty, and outlive the ordinary people.
However, is it really possible for physical workers to do their jobs without intake of meat and fish?
How can I refuse the relish of beef?
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Whew^^ I am indeed a carnivore :)
When I was young, I remember rejecting every vegetable my mother served.
However, now that I am older, I have learned the consequences of having no vegetable in one\'s diet :)
(Of course, animal protein is still needed)
When I was a child, I used to have meals without meat and fish because they were very rare and expensive.
>>CORRECT!Most parents could not afford to provide meat and fish to their offspring.
>>Most parents could not afford to provide meat and fish for their offspring.Animal protein and fat for me could be obtained from only broken eggs and sick chickens less than once a month, although my
family grew not a few chickens.
>>Animal protein and fat for me could be obtained from only broken eggs and sick chickens less than once a month, although my
family raise not a few chickens. Children with furuncles and boils on the faces were not rarely seen at that time, which caused to poke fun at them.
>>Children with furuncles and boils on the faces were not rarely seen at that time, which caused other people to poke fun at
them.It is explicable that the phenomena stemmed from their lack of essential nutrition.
>>CORRECT!A vegetarian diet has already permeated our lives in our community.
>>CORRECT!Many claim that a vegetarian diet significantly improves one\'s health.
>>CORRECT!Buddhist temples have developed some discernible ways to cook their foods without meat, fish and even spicy seasonings.
>>CORRECT!Generally speaking, monks tend to be hale and hearty, and outlive the ordinary people.
>>CORRECT!However, is it really possible for physical workers to do their jobs without intake of meat and fish?
>>However, is it really possible for physical workers to do their jobs without meat and fish intake?How can I refuse the relish of beef?
>>CORRECT!
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