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2016-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Unconditional love doesn't exist between young lovers. Even though they could say,"we love each other without any condition, they won't deny the fact that they began to be mesmerized by something they have, such as smile, appearance, beautiful eyes, and so on. However, there certainly exist a lot of mothers' unconditional love stories for their child. We have heard that a mother died of building collapse after keeping her baby alive. We can call it unconditional love. I believe there can exist unconditional love between a couple, although they began from conditional love. A broadcast journalist Meryl Comer wrote the book "Slow dancing with a stranger" about her husband's battle with Alzheimer's disease. It is real. She had to take care of her husband for 20 years. Her unconditional love made it possible for her to endure the slow dancing with a stranger for so long. I believe conditional love is not love, but it is a deal or a bargain. The real, forever unconditional lover is God.

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Good morning, Mr. [이름]^^ Unconditional love is definitely hard to find~ So far, I think our mothers and of course, God can only give it to us :) Unconditional love doesn\'t exist between young lovers. >>CORRECT!Even though they could say,\"we love each other without any condition, they won\'t deny the fact that they began to be mesmerized by something they have, such as smile, appearance, beautiful eyes, and so on. >>CORRECT!However, there certainly exist a lot of mothers\' unconditional love stories for their child. >>CORRECT!We have heard that a mother died of building collapse after keeping her baby alive.>>We have heard that a mother when a building collapsed after keeping her baby alive. We can call it unconditional love. >>CORRECT!I believe there can exist unconditional love between a couple, although they began from conditional love. >>I believe unconditional love can exist between a couple, although they began from conditional love.A broadcast journalist Meryl Comer wrote the book \"Slow dancing with a stranger\" about her husband\'s battle with Alzheimer\'s disease. >>A broadcast journalist Meryl Comer wrote the book \"Slow Dancing with a Stranger\" about her husband\'s battle with  Alzheimer\'s disease. It is real. >>CORRECT! She had to take care of her husband for 20 years. >>CORRECT!Her unconditional love made it possible for her to endure the slow dancing with a stranger for so long. >>CORRECT!I believe conditional love is not love, but it is a deal or a bargain. >>CORRECT!The real, forever unconditional lover is God. >>CORRECT!

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