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2016-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Do you think crying is a sign of weakness? or strength? Write your answer in not more than 10 sentences. I think crying is a sign of strength. I think crying is same to passion. I want to do it eagerly but when I cannot do it I cry. Even if crying cannot make me do it, it make me refresh and I will be able to challenge it again. Crying is the sign of passionate and active person.

강사 첨삭

Hi Hwa Shin! A wonderful eveining! ^^   I would agree with you. Crying is an emotion and it\'s pretty much natural reaction of a person. Either out of frustration, happiness or sadness, crying is one of the best way for us to show our emotions. Every person has the reason to cry and when we do, it\'s ok. Thank you for your opinion dear^^   See you in class! Teacher Glenda^^     Here are my corrections: Do you think crying is a sign of weakness? or strength? Write your answer in not more than 10 sentences.I think crying is a sign of strength. >> Correct I think crying is same to passion. >> I think crying is the same as passion.I want to do it eagerly but when I cannot do it I cry.>> If I really want to do something bu I can\'t, I cry. Even if crying cannot make me do it, it make me refresh and I will be able to challenge it again.>> Even if crying will not help me do it, it makes me feel better and it makes me feel challenged again.Crying is the sign of passionate and active person. >> Crying is a sign of being passionate and active person. 

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