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If it had to be one of Winter, Autumn, Spring or Summer for the rest of time, which would you choose?
Before, I would say it had to be Autumn since it has own sentimental atmosphere and it is good for taking a walk.
But I would like to say it had to be summer since it is very active and vibrant.
Even though it is hot and too hot sometimes, I can feel lively when I live in summer.
For example, I traveled to NEW YORK this summer and the whether was so hot and sunny.
So I think New york in summer inspired me of its own vibrant and lively city.
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If it had to be one of Winter, Autumn, Spring or Summer for the rest of time, which would you choose?Before, I would say it had to be Autumn since it has own sentimental atmosphere and it is good for taking a walk.
>>correctBut I would like to say it had to be summer since it is very active and vibrant.>>correctEven though it is hot and too hot sometimes, I can feel lively when I live in summer.
>>correctFor example, I traveled to NEW YORK this summer and the whether was so hot and sunny.
>>correctSo I think New york in summer inspired me of its own vibrant and lively city.
>>correct
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