homework

Hi Hwa Shin! ^^

Good evening and happy Monday! ^^

It\'s nice to hear from you immediately as the week starts.

Thank you for this piece. ^^

I\'ll see you in class.

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

In 50 words or more, answer the following question.
What\'s one thing you could never live without and why?

One thing I could never live without is my children.

>> Correct
 My children are the harvest of my fifty life. 

>> My children are the fruit of my fifty years life.
 I think my children are the sign of my sincerity.

>> Correct
 I think I live my life more hard and more modestly because of my children.

>> I think lived my life harder and more modestly because of my children.