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The main difference between them is that a house is physical and visible, in contrast, a home is abstract and emotional.
When you say, " Let's go home," you are probably not talking about simply the physical structure. You are talking about being in the spiritual place where you feel most comfortable and happiest.
Secondly, we could not make a house fancier with only money, while we could not make a home cozier with only money.
A cozy and lovable home needs a family.
Family members can create a lovable home.
Even pets can provide their owner with imperfect cozy home.
Thirdly, we can calculate the cost of a house, but we can not reckon out a home's value, because a home's value consists of many kinds of factors.
Lastly, it is very easy for us to keep a house safe, but it is very hard for us to maintain a lovable and happy home continuously.
A house could not be easily collapsed except natural disasters, while a home could be easily destroyed by small internal and external factors.
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Whew, it is one of best definitions I have ever read!
You definitely brighgtened up my morning, Sir!
I am really proud of you :)
I know we envy the rich because of their wealth, not knowing that money isn\'t everything TT
The main difference between them is that a house is physical and visible, in contrast, a home is abstract and emotional.
>>The main difference between them is that a house is physical and visible; in contrast, a home is abstract and emotional.When you say, \" Let\'s go home,\" you are probably not talking about simply the physical structure.
>>CORRECT!
You are talking about being in the spiritual place where you feel most comfortable and happiest.
>>CORRECT!Secondly, we could not make a house fancier with only money, while we could not make a home cozier with only money.
>>CORRECT!A cozy and lovable home needs a family.>>CORRECT!
Family members can create a lovable home.
>>CORRECT!Even pets can provide their owner with imperfect cozy home.
>>CORRECT!Thirdly, we can calculate the cost of a house, but we can not reckon out a home\'s value, because a home\'s value consists of many kinds of factors.
>>CORRECT!Lastly, it is very easy for us to keep a house safe, but it is very hard for us to maintain a lovable and happy home continuously.
>>CORRECT!A house could not be easily collapsed except natural disasters, while a home could be easily destroyed by small internal and external factors.
>>CORRECT!
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