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2016-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Why do people procrastinate? People procrastinate because they don’t like stress. The fact that there is something I have to do ordinary gives stress to people. Since people reject everything which could harm themselves, they also don’t accept the thought which can cause stress. This is why people usually procrastinate. If we can take the stress as motivity not as harm, it will make us more diligent and vigorous people.

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Hello Sarah !!! Have a great day!!! I do hope that you can achieve all of your goals this year because I know you can learn from all of this experiences.  I am very happy to read your homework because these activities are beneficial for you. In addition, it can also help you improve you skills in English, as a result you\'ll be successful in life. Thank you very much!!! T. Jeny   Why do people procrastinate?>>correctPeople procrastinate because they don’t like stress. >>correctThe fact that there is something I have to do ordinary gives stress to people. >>The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people.Since people reject everything which could harm themselves, they also don’t accept the thought which can cause stress. >>correctThis is why people usually procrastinate. >>correctIf we can take the stress as motivity not as harm, it will make us more diligent and vigorous people. >>If we can take stress as a motivation it won\'t be harmful, it will make us more diligent and vigorous people.

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