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2016-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi Jeny! Good morning:) You are very diligent that you give me a feedback of writing in the early morning! I read your thankful feedback and I have a question. In first homework, you correct me “The fact that there is something I have to do ordinary gives stress to people->The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people.” I am confused of the verb ‘give’ because I can’t understand which subject is matched with this verb. First time I think it match with ‘The fact’, but if that is right, ‘give’ must become ‘gives’! On the other hand, I have known the form of [be]+[past participle of verb]+[by]+[thing doing action], but I don’t know this form also applies to nuance! lol In this time, I will write about ‘Why people like to listen to gossip’ In my opinion, the reason is because human beings are lonely ordinary. Because of that, for the gossip which is about other people, they sympathize, envy, and are jealous. [I have no space to write any more:(]

강사 첨삭

Hello Sarah!!

Thank you for the questions, it means that you are eager to learn new things about English!!! Have fun in learning English!

Take care!!!

T. Jeny

 

Hi Jeny! Good morning:)

>>correct
You are very diligent that you give me a feedback of writing in the early morning!

>>You are very diligent in giving me a feedback on my homework this morning.
I read your thankful feedback and I have a question.

>>correct
In first homework, you correct me “The fact that there is something I have to do ordinary gives stress to people->The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people.”

>>In first homework, you corrected me “The fact that there is something I have to do ordinary gives stress to people.The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people.”

>>(I can\'t understand what you want to say but you can also say) The fact that sometimes, I do ordinary things that make other people stress.

I am confused of the verb ‘give’ because I can’t understand which subject is matched with this verb.

>>I am confused of the verb ‘give’ because I can’t understand which subject is a match with this verb.( you can use make or create)

First time I think it match with ‘The fact’, but if that is right, ‘give’ must become ‘gives’!

>>At first, I thought, it matches with the phrase, \"The fact,\" but if that is right, give should be gives.( The subject in the sentence is things so it should be give)
On the other hand, I have known the form of [be]+[past participle of verb]+[by]+[thing doing action], but I don’t know this form also applies to nuance! lol

>>correct
In this time, I will write about ‘Why people like to listen to gossip’

>>correct
In my opinion, the reason is because human beings are lonely ordinary.

>>In my opinion, the reason is because human beings are usually lonely.
Because of that, for the gossip which is about other people, they sympathize, envy, and are jealous.

>>Because of that, gossiping about other people can mean sympathy, envy and jealousy.
[I have no space to write any more:(]

>>I already don\'t have enough space to write.

>>I have no space to write on.

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