Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jane,
Below is my homework;
My life is full of energy. Because I always try to find something new and try to achieve it.
Today's homework is very philosophical. hahaha
Have a nice day!!
[이름] Seo.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thanks for your composition today! you seemed formal in writing this.^^ Have a wonderful afternoon!T. JanE ^^
Hi Jane,>> Correct Below is my homework;>> Correct My life is full of energy. Because I always try to find something new and try to achieve it.>> My life is full of energy because I always try to find something new then I try to achieve it. Today\'s homework is very philosophical. hahaha>> Correct Have a nice day!![이름] Seo.
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