HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, students are able to have access to a great number of useful study aids, especially on the Internet for free.
Our government has been providing all Korean students with a lot of daily lectures like maths, English, history etc.
When I was very young, my father used to buy me many books concerning lives of great men and journals for children titled " a fellow traveler."
He also took all family members to a theater to show famous movies like "Ben Hur," "The Ten Commandments," and the like.
Those cares must have been way exceptional, given my family's economic level and people's lives in the rural area.
I'm sure that he gave me the opportunity to have access to very useful study aids.
Too many study aids are making students confused to decide which one would be better.
The study aid's role must be aimed to pull out students' willingness to study hard and set on fire over eagerness to learn as my father did.
The most useful study aid is someone's willingness and eagerness to learn.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]!
Have you had lunch?
How was it? Mine was delicious (I love meat^^)
We have different types of study aids, but I still stick to old-fashioned books.
See you!
Today, students are able to have access to a great number of useful study aids, especially on the Internet for free.
>>CORRECT!
Our government has been providing all Korean students with a lot of daily lectures like maths, English, history etc.
>>CORRECT!
When I was very young, my father used to buy me many books concerning lives of great men and journals for children titled \" a fellow traveler.\"
>>When I was very young, my father used to buy me many books concerning lives of great men and journals for children titled \"A Fellow Traveler.\"
He also took all family members to a theater to show famous movies like \"Ben Hur,\" \"The Ten Commandments,\" and the like.
>>He also took all family members to the theater to show famous movies like \"Ben Hur,\" \"The Ten Commandments,\" and the like.
Those cares must have been way exceptional, given my family\'s economic level and people\'s lives in the rural area.
>>Those ways of caring must have been way exceptional, given my family\'s economic level and people\'s lives in the rural area.
I\'m sure that he gave me the opportunity to have access to very useful study aids.
>>CORRECT!
Too many study aids are making students confused to decide which one would be better.
>>CORRECT!
The study aid\'s role must be aimed to pull out students\' willingness to study hard and set on fire over eagerness to learn as my father did.
>>CORRECT!
The most useful study aid is someone\'s willingness and eagerness to learn.
>>CORRECT!
>>CORRECT!
Our government has been providing all Korean students with a lot of daily lectures like maths, English, history etc.
>>CORRECT!
When I was very young, my father used to buy me many books concerning lives of great men and journals for children titled \" a fellow traveler.\"
>>When I was very young, my father used to buy me many books concerning lives of great men and journals for children titled \"A Fellow Traveler.\"
He also took all family members to a theater to show famous movies like \"Ben Hur,\" \"The Ten Commandments,\" and the like.
>>He also took all family members to the theater to show famous movies like \"Ben Hur,\" \"The Ten Commandments,\" and the like.
Those cares must have been way exceptional, given my family\'s economic level and people\'s lives in the rural area.
>>Those ways of caring must have been way exceptional, given my family\'s economic level and people\'s lives in the rural area.
I\'m sure that he gave me the opportunity to have access to very useful study aids.
>>CORRECT!
Too many study aids are making students confused to decide which one would be better.
>>CORRECT!
The study aid\'s role must be aimed to pull out students\' willingness to study hard and set on fire over eagerness to learn as my father did.
>>CORRECT!
The most useful study aid is someone\'s willingness and eagerness to learn.
>>CORRECT!
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