homework :)

The best gift which I ever received is a stuffed puppy which my mother gave me when I was a elementary student. When I was young, my father often gave me stuffed animals after he got drunk. Since that, there were many stuffed animals in my room (of course there are still a lot of stuffed animals in my room), but there wasn’t which my mother gave me. One day that I was scolded by my mom, she gave me a packed gift in the evening. It was a stuffed puppy! A puppy was my favorite animal, and I didn’t have a stuffed puppy yet. At that moment, because I had never been given a stuffed animal from my mom, I said “Wow! Is this my father’s gift?!” Oh.. I will never forget my mother’s face at that time. The puppy is still in my room, and will be there forever :)

Hello Sarah!!!

Thank you for answering our homework for today. I know that this activity could really enhance your skills in English. Just believe in yourself that you can achieve your goals in speaking the English language.

Your family is also very lucky to have you!!! I am proud of you and your family!!!

T. Jeny

 

The best gift which I ever received is a stuffed puppy which my mother gave me when I was a elementary student.

>>The best gift which I ever received was a stuffed puppy which my mother gave me when I was an elementary student.
When I was young, my father often gave me stuffed animals after he got drunk.

>>When I was young, my father often gives me stuffed animals after he getting drunk.
Since that, there were many stuffed animals in my room (of course there are still a lot of stuffed animals in my room), but there wasn’t which my mother gave me.

>>From that time, there were many stuffed animals in my room (of course there are still a lot of stuffed animals in my room), but they weren\'t from my mother.

One day that I was scolded by my mom, she gave me a packed gift in the evening.

>>I can still remember the day when I was scolded by my mother and she gave me a packed gift in the evening.
It was a stuffed puppy!

>>correct

A puppy was my favorite animal, and I didn’t have a stuffed puppy yet.

>>It was my favorite animal, and I didn’t have a stuffed puppy at that time yet.
At that moment, because I had never been given a stuffed animal from my mom, I said “Wow! Is this my father’s gift?!”

>>correct

Oh.. I will never forget my mother’s face at that time.

>>correct
The puppy is still in my room, and will be there forever :)

>>correct