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Hello ^^ Charry I was happy to talk to you Thank you for your good recommendation. That would give me motivation to study English harder. I agree this sentence Because I have experience at my work place. When my junior coworker worked with me, she gave a drug for the patient. She did not have right information about the drug. And she explained wrong. The result of misinformation, the patient's caregiver was very upset. I saw that situation, I felt very sorry. My coworker did her best. But she didn't got the honor. Someone who has A little Knowledge could do something without notice he or she was wrong. I think It is more dangerous than someone do something bad knowing it is bad. From [이름](My Korean name is JiYeon)

Hi, [이름] (JiYeon)! ^_^ Thank you very much for writing in our composition board today. I\'m happy to know that you study your evaluation page and I\'m also glad to know that you are motived to study English harder. I think your composition for today is good. I enjoyed reading your thoughts and opinions in relation to this matter. I totally agree with you when you said a little knowledge is very deadly especially in your line of work because you deal with lives. A simple misinformation could cause the life of another. Anyhow, please continue making good sentences. Don\'t forget to include your punctuations (period, comma, exclamation mark, question mark) in your sentences. Also continue studying your subject-verb agreement and your prepositions. Other than that, I think you did a great job so keep it up. See you again later. I hope you\'re having a great day. :) ~Teacher Charry Hello ^^ Charry >> Hello, Charry. ^^ I was happy to talk to you >> I was happy to talk to you. OR >> Talking to you made me happy. Thank you for your good recommendation. >> CORRECT! OR >> I would like to thank you for your good recommendation.That would give me motivation to study English harder.>> CORRECT!OR >> That would motivate me more to study English.I agree this sentence >> I agree to this sentence. Because I have experience at my work place. >> It\'s because I have experienced it in my work place. When my junior coworker worked with me, she gave a drug for the patient. >> When my junior coworker worked with me, she gave a drug to the patient.She did not have right information about the drug. And she explained wrong. >> She did not have the right information about the drug and she explained it wrong.The result of misinformation, the patient\'s caregiver was very upset. >> The result was misinformation and the patient\'s caregiver was very upset. OR >> This resulted to misinformation and the patient\'s caregiver was very angry.I saw that situation, I felt very sorry. >> When I saw that situation, I felt very sorry for her.My coworker did her best. >> CORRECT! OR >> My coworker did everything she could. But she didn\'t got the honor. >> But she didn\'t get the honor. Someone who has A little Knowledge could do something without notice he or she was wrong. >> Someone who has a little knowledge could do something without noticing that he or she is wrong. I think It is more dangerous than someone do something bad knowing it is bad.>> I think it is more dangerous than someone who does something bad and knowing that it is bad.From [이름](My Korean name is JiYeon) >> From: [이름] (My Korean name is JiYeon.)