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Hi charry Nice to meet you. Owing to you, I know when I made sentence, I did mistake. I want to be more perfect English speaker, Would you help me? I need your help. Be my good teacher. Bye^^ I think that human has no right to keep the animal. Zoo is fantastic place. When I was a girl, I also liked going to zoo as children. When I have become older, I feel keeping animals in the zoo are pity. They would like to have freedom. They wouldn't like staying the fence in the zoo. Someone might insist that animals which stay in the zoo are protected. And They don't worry about seeking the their own food. But the right of hungry is just their own. Human can't interrupt animal's nature world.

Hi, [이름] (JiYeon)! ^_^ Thank you very much for sharing your opinion regarding this matter. Thank you for doing your best to make good sentences. I enjoyed reading them. :) I will do my best to help you improve your English skills but I expect the same dedication from you. Let\'s work together to make sure that you become an excellent English speaker. ^_~ I think animals in zoos are pitiful. Animals should never be placed in captivity because like us, they have feelings too. It\'s terrible to be trapped inside a cage and be tortured for no reason. If animals could only talk, they would tell us not to cage them and not to treat them cruelly. I strongly oppose zoos as well and I stopped going to a zoo fifteen years ago. It was a silent protest and it\'s good that nobody in my city has ever thought of building a zoo. People are often cruel and ruthless. Anyhow, I hope you are doing great. See you again later. :) ~Teacher Charry Hi charry >> Hi, Charry. Nice to meet you. >> It\'s nice to meet you.Owing to you, I know when I made sentence, I did mistake.>> [Do you mean]: Whenever I made a sentence, I know there\'s a mistake. I want to be more perfect English speaker, Would you help me? >> I want to be more perfect as an English speaker. Would you help me? I need your help. >> CORRECT! OR >> I need your assistance. Be my good teacher. >> CORRECT! OR >> Please be a good teacher to me. Bye^^ >> Bye. ^^ OR >> Goodbye. ^^  I think that human has no right to keep the animal. >> I think that a human has no right to keep an animal. OR >> I think humans have no right to lock up animals. Zoo is fantastic place. >> A zoo is a fantastic place. When I was a girl, I also liked going to zoo as children. >> When I was a girl, I also liked going to a/the zoo like the other children. When I have become older, I feel keeping animals in the zoo are pity. >> When I have become older, I felt that keeping animals in the zoo is pitiful.They would like to have freedom. >> CORRECT! OR >> They also want to be free. They wouldn\'t like staying the fence in the zoo. >> They wouldn\'t like staying in a fenced zoo. Someone might insist that animals which stay in the zoo are protected. >> CORRECT! OR >> Some might insist that animals in zoos are protected. And They don\'t worry about seeking the their own food. >> And they don\'t have to worry about seeking for their own food. But the right of hungry is just their own. >> [Do you mean]: But hunting for food is their right. Human can\'t interrupt animal\'s nature world. >> Humans can\'t interrupt the animals\' natural way of living.