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2016-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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In modern popular fiction, a superhero is a type of costumed heroic character. He or she possesses supernatural powers and usually battles supervillains. However, I have not been that interested in those characters such as Superman, Batman and Spider-Man because the stories seemed too impractical and unreal. If I could be any superhero, I would be a spiritualist who possesses supernatural spirit powers. One day, God made a decision to choose a devout and sincere man(me) to purify the sinful world. The man has been endowed with supernatural powers by his devout faith to God. He should not make money using endowed powers because the spiritual power would be deprived right away from him. He could go anywhere wars, conflicts and disputes between countries, communities and personnel are taking place. He can address those fights through his outstanding arbitration to give each of them small wins. I desire him to suggest one of the best proposals for reunification of Korea to both sides.

강사 첨삭

Sir [이름]^^

You are so considerate :)

(Actually, I was dreaming to be Invisible Woman^^)

See you tomorrow~


In modern popular fiction, a superhero is a type of costumed heroic character.

>>CORRECT!
He or she possesses supernatural powers and usually battles supervillains.

>>CORRECT!
However, I have not been that interested in those characters such as Superman, Batman and Spider-Man because the stories seemed too impractical and unreal.

>>However, I have not been that interested in those characters such as Superman, Batman and Spider Man because the stories seemed too impractical and unreal.
If I could be any superhero, I would be a spiritualist who possesses supernatural spirit powers.

>>If I could be any superhero, I would be a spiritualist who possesses supernatural spiritual powers.
One day, God made a decision to choose a devout and sincere man(me) to purify the sinful world.

>>CORRECT!
The man has been endowed with supernatural powers by his devout faith to God.

>>CORRECT!
He should not make money using endowed powers because the spiritual power would be deprived right away from him.
>>He should not make money using endowed powers because the spiritual power would be deprived from him right away.
He could go anywhere wars, conflicts and disputes between countries, communities and personnel are taking place.

>>CORRECT!
He can address those fights through his outstanding arbitration to give each of them small wins.

>>CORRECT!
I desire him to suggest one of the best proposals for reunification of Korea to both sides.

>>I desire him to suggest one of the best proposals for reunification of both sides of Korea.

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