homework

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Happy Wednesday dear, thank you once again for sending in and sharing your thoughts on this essay

topic. Continue practicing answering random topics to exercise your fluency and the spontaneity of your thought.

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Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Would you rather be the smartest person in the world, but no
one knows about you or the most popular person in the world,
but you\'re not very smart? Why?

 I would rather be the smartest person in the world.

>> Correct
 My intelligent will help me to understand my circumstances and to solve all problems.

>> My intelligence will help me to understand circumstance and solve problems that comes my way. 

So I will be able to live my life subjectively.
>> So I would be able to live my life subjectively.

 Popularity is uneasy. 

>> Correct
 My life will have to depend on eyes of other people. And other people will be inconstant and thoughtless because my life is not their life.

>> Being popular, my life will have to depend on the opinion of other people. Some people will be inconsistent and thoughtless about me because it\'s not their life. 
 If I have a firm philosophy I would not be controlled by other people but I don\'t.

>> Correct