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In our country, getting a job after graduation is not so easy. In this year, youth unemployment rate is the most highest than any other years. Probably, there are many other problems which are involved in this badly news. In addition, the problem which is about the president; all of news are saying on these days is also one of the major matter. However, maybe no one knows what is exactly problem. Anyway, because getting a job after graduation is not so easy, people want to be a public official or get a specialized job. Of course both are very hard to be, so a lot of high school students study harder to go a medical college for a specialized job and a lot of university students study for a test of public official. It looks unhealthy society, but maybe it will get better because now on people begin to recognize the problem. It will be better, I hope.

Hello Sarah, Nice to talk to you today! I do hope that you\'ll enjoy learning English. It will take time for us to develop our skills but with determination and confidence you can achieve everything in life. For tomorrow I will give you another essay  to improve your writing skills. T. Jeny   In our country, getting a job after graduation is not so easy. >>correctIn this year, youth unemployment rate is the most highest than any other years. >>This year, the young generation\'s unemployment rate is the highest in record.Probably, there are many other problems which are involved in this badly news. >>Probably, there are many other problems which are involved in this bad news.In addition, the problem which is about the president; all of news are saying on these days is also one of the major matter. >>In addition, the problem is about the president; all the news are saying that this is a major matter these days.However, maybe no one knows what is exactly problem. >>However, maybe no one knows what is the exact problem.Anyway, because getting a job after graduation is not so easy, people want to be a public official or get a specialized job. >>correctOf course both are very hard to be, so a lot of high school students study harder to go a medical college for a specialized job and a lot of university students study for a test of public official. >>Of course both are very hard to accomplish, so a lot of high school students study harder to go to medical college for a specialized job and a lot of university students study for a test to become a public official.It looks unhealthy society, but maybe it will get better because now on people begin to recognize the problem. >>It looks an unhealthy society, but maybe it will get better because now people begin to recognize the problem.It will be better, I hope. >>correct