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2016-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Many students complain about having to learn history. Why do we need knowledge of the past? Write an essay of not more than 10 sentences convincing skeptics that learning about the past is important. The reason we are learning history is we have to talk with Past. When we are talking with past, We know the present. Then we can forcast our futuer. we can not repeat mistakes when we did it in the past. It is a difficult question. Bye^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, JiYeon! Thank you very much for doing your best to answer our essay homework even if the question was difficult. I appreciate your effort. ^^ I also agree when you said it is important for us to know the past because this will tell us what to do at present and help us predict what will happen in the future. Your answer is simple but concise. I encourage you to write more and to write longer sentences. You can do it! Ajah! ^_^ See you again on Wednesday. ~Teacher Charry Many students complain about having to learn history. Why do we need knowledge of the past? Write an essay of not more than 10 sentences convincing skeptics that learning about the past is important.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The reason we are learning history is we have to talk with Past.>> The reason we are learning history is we because we have to be knowledgeable of the past.When we are talking with past, We know the present. >> When we are knowledgeable of the past, we know the present. Then we can forcast our futuer. >> We can also forecast the future. we can not repeat mistakes when we did it in the past.>> We cannot repeat the same mistakes we did in the past.It is a difficult question. >> CORRECT! OR >> The question is difficult. Bye^^ >> Bye. ^^ 

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