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2016-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Woodrow Wilson once said, "Friendship is the only cement that will hold the world together." Do you agree or disagree? Explain your answer in not more than 10 sentences. Use reasons and examples to explain your answer. I Think Friendship is very important thing. But I disagree that is only cement that will hold the world. That is one of things to make close each country. There are many things to link the world. For example, love, thanks, forgiveness, courage and patience. I think when those things are good match, world will be more peacefuel.

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Hello there JiYeon! ^__^ Thank you very much for taking the time to share your opinion regarding this matter. I think they\'re beautiful. :)I also agree that friendship is not the only thing that could help bind and heal this world. There are other important and essential things that are necessary like the ones you\'ve mentioned earlier. I think the world is a messed up place with so much hate and suffering.  Having things such as love, gratitude, forgiveness and patience would help this place become a better place to live in. Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. See you on Wednesday. Take care always. ^_~ ~Teacher Charry Woodrow Wilson once said, \"Friendship is the only cement that will hold the world together.\" Do you agree or disagree? Explain your answer in not more than 10 sentences. Use reasons and examples to explain your answer.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I Think Friendship is very important thing. >> I think friendship is a very important thing.But I disagree that is only cement that will hold the world. >> But I disagree that it is the only cement that will hold the world.That is one of things to make close each country. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: That is one of the things that would help a country become closer to another country.There are many things to link the world. >> There are many things that could help link the world. For example, love, thanks, forgiveness, courage and patience.>> Some of the examples would be: love, gratitude, forgiveness, courage and patience. I think when those things are good match, world will be more peacefuel. >> I think when those things come together, the world will be more peaceful.

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