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2016-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Writing task! Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences. If you could have free, unlimited service for five years from an extremely good cook, chauffeur, or masseuse, which would you choose? That question sounds awesome first! If I have free service, I would choose good cook. Because I love to develop my skill, and good cook would be good skill for me. I would be honor to be taught from good cook by tasting his/her dishes for five years. Masseuse sounds great but chauffeur sounds not good because if I enjoy that service, I would get on weight cause its’ comfort. So the best selection for me is having free service from an extremely good cook.

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Hahaha! We have the same choice my dear!I would rather choose the same service service too kkk... Anyway, thank you so much for doing very good. Take care and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Writing task!Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences.If you could have free, unlimited service for five years from an extremely good cook, chauffeur, or masseuse, which would you choose?That question sounds awesome first! If I have free service, I would choose good cook. >>correctBecause I love to develop my skill, and good cook would be good skill for me. >>correctI would be honor to be taught from good cook by tasting his/her dishes for five years. >>correctMasseuse sounds great but chauffeur sounds not good because if I enjoy that service, I would get on weight cause its’ comfort. >>correct So the best selection for me is having free service from an extremely good cook. >>correct

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