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Korean public transport system is one of the most topnotch ones in the world.
Here are the advantages of public transport.
Firstly, you can be always on time for your appointment, especially if you use subway.
Secondly, while being moved on it, you can enjoy reading something and looking out the window and you can feel safe and comfortable..
Thirdly, you don't worry about the car parking and you can save money.
Lastly, we can help to reduce traffic jams using public transport, but not own cars.
Meanwhile, the disadvantages of public transport are as follows.
Firstly, you can't go everywhere you want because of some limits of the public transport system.
Secondly, it's not easy to change traveling schedules abruptly.
Thirdly, when traveling, you don't have your own time with your family and lover.
Lastly, transferring to other transport could bother you.
Anyway, we can minimize the pollution by making bus' emission control laws and supplying more pollution-free electric buses.
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Thank you very much for this detailed explanation, Sir!
Good morning! Ha! Ha!
Surely, I know the burden of mass transportation TT
There are times when I just cry since I had to walk home under the rain TT
(Actually, that time, I remember ALL of my misfortunes, ha! ha!)
Korean public transport system is one of the most topnotch ones in the world.
>>Korean public transport system is one of the most topnotch ones in the world.Here are the advantages of public transport.
>>CORRECT!Firstly, you can be always on time for your appointment, especially if you use subway.
>>Firstly, you can always be on time for your appointment, especially if you use subway.Secondly, while being moved on it, you can enjoy reading something and looking out the window and you can feel safe and comfortable..
>>Secondly, during the commute, you can enjoy reading something and looking out the window and you can feel safe and comfortable..Thirdly, you don\'t worry about the car parking and you can save money.
>>CORRECT!Lastly, we can help to reduce traffic jams using public transport, but not own cars.
>>Lastly, we can help to reduce traffic jams using public transport, but not our own cars.Meanwhile, the disadvantages of public transport are as follows.
>>CORRECT!Firstly, you can\'t go everywhere you want because of some limits of the public transport system.
>>Firstly, you can\'t go anywhere you want because of some limits of the public transport system.Secondly, it\'s not easy to change traveling schedules abruptly.
>>CORRECT!Thirdly, when traveling, you don\'t have your own time with your family and lover.>>CORRECT!
Lastly, transferring to other transport could bother you.
>>CORRECT!Anyway, we can minimize the pollution by making bus\' emission control laws and supplying more pollution-free electric buses.
>>Anyway, we can minimize pollution by making bus emission control laws and supplying more pollution-free electric buses.
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