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2016-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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It's very hard to talk about the worst vacation because to my memory, all vacations ended up being priceless. Therefore, I would be better off introducing a regretful vacation. When I was in the army, I fortunately used to be promoted faster than others. So my mental shock was indescribably heavier than others as I failed to be promoted for the first time. My boss consoled me and allowed me to have three days of vacation. During the vacation, nobody wanted to talk about anything at first, but my wife and son tried to encourage me to cheer up. I said, " I am so sorry that the result didn't live up to your expectation and I made you so disappointed." I was really angry because I had put my pedal to the metal in doing my job. Someone says, " Seeing the magnificent sea is the best way to appease one's anger." I drove to the east coast area and maneuvered from the north to the south along the seashore shouting out, "I have the real best way to manage my anger. It is a prayer to God."

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [이름]^^
Ha! Ha! I am so sorry for asking you this topic TT
I would just like to break the monotony of \"what\'s your best vacation\"?
See you tomorrow, Sir!
(Thank you for your spontaneity and flexibility)
Thanks for using our new idiom :)
It\'s very hard to talk about the worst vacation because to my memory, all vacations ended up being priceless.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, I would be better off introducing a regretful vacation.
>>CORRECT!
When I was in the army, I fortunately used to be promoted faster than others.
>>CORRECT!
So my mental shock was indescribably heavier than others as I failed to be promoted for the first time.
>>CORRECT!
My boss consoled me and allowed me to have three days of vacation.
>>CORRECT!
During the vacation, nobody wanted to talk about anything at first, but my wife and son tried to encourage me to cheer up.
>>During the vacation, nobody wanted to talk about anything at first, but my wife and son tried to encourage me.
>>During the vacation, nobody wanted to talk about anything at first, but my wife and son tried to cheer me up.
I said, \" I am so sorry that the result didn\'t live up to your expectation and I made you so disappointed.\"
>>CORRECT!
I was really angry because I had put my pedal to the metal in doing my job.
>>CORRECT!
Someone says, \" Seeing the magnificent sea is the best way to appease one\'s anger.\"
>>Someone said, \"Seeing the magnificent sea is the best way to appease one\'s anger.\"
I drove to the east coast area and maneuvered from the north to the south along the seashore shouting out, \"I have the real best way to manage my anger. It is a prayer to God.\"
>>CORRECT!

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