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2016-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Writing task! Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences. If you knew you were going to go blind in 2 months, what would you do? What would you want to see? If it would happen, I would like to travel for one month with my family. And I would like to see fantastic scenery and spot in the world. During traveling I want to take a video with voice of there at that moment to heard after two month to remember. And I would stay my hometown with my close people and family for one month to remember themselves.

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  Good evening my dear!Great job!You were able to share your opinions and thoughts about the said topic and I thank you for that... Take care and have a good night... xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Writing task!Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences.If you knew you were going to go blind in 2 months, what would you do? What would you want to see?If it would happen, I would like to travel for one month with my family. >>correctAnd I would like to see fantastic scenery and spot in the world. >>correctDuring traveling I want to take a video with voice of there at that moment to heard after two month to remember. >>While traveling, I want to take a video of that so I could listen to it over and over again for 2 months to remember.And I would stay my hometown with my close people and family for one month to remember themselves. >>And I would stay in my hometown with my family and the people I love for one month to make my remaining life memorable.      

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