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2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

You are given a chance to go back to a time in the past where you could change something in your life. At which point would you return and what event would you change? I want to go back to my middle school student. So I will study English hard not only for exam english but also for life english. When I return to present I will be able to use English as a native. What I imagine to do well English is wonderful. I can speak English well, I can listen English well, I can read English well and I can write English well. How splendid it is.

강사 첨삭

Hi Hwa Shin! ^^

A Magnificent Thursday dear,


I would agree with you. Going back to the past and being able to correct our mistake is a great privilege.

It was shown in your answers how passionate you are in learning English. It\'s admirable. ^^

Continue that passion and eagerness, match it with action and in no time you\'ll be very good in English.

I\'ll see you in class ^^


Teacher Glenda




Here are my corrections:

You are given a chance to go back to a time in the past where
you could change something in your life. At which point would
you return and what event would you change?

 I want to go back to my middle school student.

>> I want to go back when I was in my middle school.

or

>> I want to go back when I was a middle school student.
 So I will study English hard not only for exam english but also for life english.

>> I will study English hard not only for exams but also to use it in my personal life.
 When I return to present I will be able to use English as a native.

>> And when I return to the present, I will be able to use or speak English like a native speaker.
 What I imagine to do well English is wonderful.

>> Imagining that I\'m doing well in English feels wonderful.
 I can speak English well, I can listen English well, I can read English well and I can write English well. How splendid it is.

>> I can speak English well, I can listen to English well, I can read in English well and I can write in English well. How splendid it is.

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