homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Hwa Shin! ^^
A Magnificent Thursday dear,
I would agree with you. Going back to the past and being able to correct our mistake is a great privilege.
It was shown in your answers how passionate you are in learning English. It\'s admirable. ^^
Continue that passion and eagerness, match it with action and in no time you\'ll be very good in English.
I\'ll see you in class ^^
Teacher Glenda
Here are my corrections:
You are given a chance to go back to a time in the past where
you could change something in your life. At which point would
you return and what event would you change?
I want to go back to my middle school student.
>> I want to go back when I was in my middle school.
or
>> I want to go back when I was a middle school student.
So I will study English hard not only for exam english but also for life english.
>> I will study English hard not only for exams but also to use it in my personal life.
When I return to present I will be able to use English as a native.
>> And when I return to the present, I will be able to use or speak English like a native speaker.
What I imagine to do well English is wonderful.
>> Imagining that I\'m doing well in English feels wonderful.
I can speak English well, I can listen English well, I can read English well and I can write English well. How splendid it is.
>> I can speak English well, I can listen to English well, I can read in English well and I can write in English well. How splendid it is.
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