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2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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As my dear Rose stole a glance, I am not too talkative and extroverted, but a little quiet and meditative which is way different from introverted. The advantages of having friends who are different from me are as follows. I don't feel bored while I am with them, and I can get a lot of useful information from them very easily. In addition, I could ask them to help me out with anything urgent and make new friends by their introduction. Meanwhile, the advantages of having friends who are similar to me are as follows. I can have deep conversations with them and consult some important matters with them. Furthermore, I like their polite manners which give respects to each other. So I could expect our friendship to last for long. However, I've never thought of which kind of friend I prefer for myself. In fact, I have maintained my friendship with a lot kinds of friends so far. Any friends seem to possess precious characters that I don't have and could't resemble. Balanced meals are conducive to good health.

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Believe it or not, Sir, my friends are actually calm and quiet people :) I don\'t know, but I love how we neutralize one another^^ I usually gravitate towards introvert people :) As my dear Rose stole a glance, I am not too talkative and extroverted, but a little quiet and meditative which is way different from introverted. >>CORRECT!The advantages of having friends who are different from me are as follows. >>CORRECT!I don\'t feel bored while I am with them, and I can get a lot of useful information from them very easily. >>CORRECT!In addition, I could ask them to help me out with anything urgent and make new friends by their introduction. >>CORRECT!Meanwhile, the advantages of having friends who are similar to me are as follows. >>CORRECT!I can have deep conversations with them and consult some important matters with them. >>CORRECT!Furthermore, I like their polite manners which give respects to each other. >>CORRECT!So I could expect our friendship to last for long. >>CORRECT!However, I\'ve never thought of which kind of friend I prefer for myself. >>CORRECT!In fact, I have maintained my friendship with a lot kinds of friends so far. >>In fact, I have maintained my friendship with a lot of kinds of friends so far.Any friends seem to possess precious characters that I don\'t have and could\'t resemble. >>Every friend seems to possess precious characteristics that I don\'t have and couldn\'t resemble.Balanced meals are conducive to good health. >>CORRECT!

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