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2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Don't put all your eggs in one basket 2. Drastic times call for drastic measures 3. Elvis has left the building 1. When you try to invest in your money, people advise you as follows Don't put all your eggs in one basket. 2. Nowadays in Korea political situation is unstable. Korean people think that drastic times call for drastic measures. 3.Elvis has left the building. Let's go back home.

강사 첨삭

Hi Hwa Shin! ^^

A Magnificent Thursday dear,


I hope that you would also use these idioms in casual conversations.

It\'s definitely a good way to improve your skills in English speaking.

I\'ll see you in class ^^


Teacher Glenda


Here are my corrections:

1. Don\'t put all your eggs in one basket
2. Drastic times call for drastic measures
3. Elvis has left the building


1. When you try to invest in your money, people advise you as follows
Don\'t put all your eggs in one basket. 

>> When you try to invest your money, people would advise you not to put all of your eggs in one basket.

 2. Nowadays in Korea political situation is unstable.
Korean people think that drastic times call for drastic measures.
>> Correct


 3.Elvis has left the building. Let\'s go back home.

>> Corect

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