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2016-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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We are sometimes proud of ourselves after coming up with something new, and right away disappointed at the news that it has already existed. I think it should be respected and acknowledged if not plagiarism. A creative side can be divided into two groups even though the border between them could be unclear. while one is original thinking, the other innovative one. The former belongs to geniuses and extraordinary people. It is sometimes unbelievable and even weird to understand. It is usually expressed by a nerdy and odd fish. However, it could be outstanding to exceed a half or a century at once. The latter belongs to ordinary people like me. The last version of a car model must be the most robust and efficient because it is launched after taking a lot of feedbacks and innovative needs for years. I am so proud of dedicating to the Army with many proposals and reports during my army life. Innovative ideas need deep accumulation of knowledge, thinking, experience and painful agony.

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Innovative thinking is really difficult to cultivate. I really envy people who can come up with brilliant ideas. Have a great day, Sir! See you on Monday! We are sometimes proud of ourselves after coming up with something new, and right away disappointed at the news that it has already existed. >>We are sometimes proud of ourselves after coming up with something new, and right away get disappointed at the news that it had already existed.I think it should be respected and acknowledged if not plagiarism. >>I think it should be respected and acknowledged if it is not plagiarism.A creative side can be divided into two groups even though the border between them could be unclear. >>CORRECT!while one is original thinking, the other innovative one. >>One is original thinking, the other is the innovative one.The former belongs to geniuses and extraordinary people. >>CORRECT!It is sometimes unbelievable and even weird to understand. >>CORRECT!It is usually expressed by a nerdy and odd fish. >>CORRECT!However, it could be outstanding to exceed a half or a century at once. >>CORRECT!The latter belongs to ordinary people like me. >>CORRECT!The last version of a car model must be the most robust and efficient because it is launched after taking a lot of feedbacks and innovative needs for years. >>The latest version of a car model must be the most robust and efficient because it is launched after taking a lot of feedback and innovative needs for years.I am so proud of dedicating to the Army with many proposals and reports during my army life. >>I am so proud of dedicating myself to the army with many proposals and reports.Innovative ideas need deep accumulation of knowledge, thinking, experience and painful agony. >>CORRECT!

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