homework

Edit the paragraph below. My name is [Name]. Today is Saturday March 4(th). I a(m)going (to)shopping with my daughter Misuzu. She is twelve years old. We are going to buy clothes. Misuzu wants new (black) boots and a new winter coat. I need new pair the gloves. We are also going (to) buy a birthday present for Misuzu's friend. Tommorrow is her birthday. She (will) having a party.

Good evening, Jacob!^^   You said this is difficult, but you still did a good job. When editing a sentence or paragraph, check the spelling and grammar. Check the punctuation marks, too.   Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you\'ll have a fun-filled weekend. See you next week! :)   _T. Mayleen ^_^   My name is [Name]. Today is Saturday March 4(th). >> Today is Saturday, March 4. YOU ONLY NEED TO PUT A COMMA.   I a(m)going (to)shopping with my daughter Misuzu. >> I am going shopping with my daughter Misuzu.   She is twelve years old. We are going to buy clothes. >> Correct!   Misuzu wants new (black) boots and a new winter coat. >> Correct!   I need new pair the gloves. >> I need a new pair of gloves.   We are also going (to) buy a birthday present for Misuzu\'s friend. >> Correct!   Tommorrow is her birthday. She (will) having a party. >> She is having a party.