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I disagree this sentence. Because the human never be great. Human is naturally being making mistake. And Human also can be matured by learning from their mistake. I think the great man is not a man who does a things for a first time. The great man is a man who do it continually nevertheless he does mistake. When we made mistake, It is difficult to appear fault honestly. But we should confess our fault and modify it and try not to do it again. That is the way we are really to be great.

Hello, JiYeon! ^_^ Thank you very much for doing your best to answer our essay question. I enjoyed reading your thoughts and opinions. I think a great person is a mixture of someone who\'s not afraid to try new things and someone who\'s not afraid to try again when he fails the first time. When you\'re always willing to try new things, you become wiser. When you\'re not afraid to try again each time you fall, you become stronger. Anyhow, that is my point-of-view. I hope you\'re doing great. See you later. ^^ ~Teacher Charry I disagree this sentence. >> I disagree with this sentence. Because the human never be great. >> [Do you mean]: It\'s because humans can never be truly great. Human is naturally being making mistake. >> A human is born to naturally make mistakes. And Human also can be matured by learning from their mistake. >> Humans become mature by learning from their mistakes.I think the great man is not a man who does a things for a first time.>> I think the great man is not a man who does things for the first time.The great man is a man who do it continually nevertheless he does mistake. >> The great man is a man who does it continually even if he does mistakes.When we made mistake, It is difficult to appear fault honestly. >> When we made a mistake, it is difficult to honestly admit our fault.But we should confess our fault and modify it and try not to do it again. >> But we should confess our fault, modify it and try not to do it again. OR >> But we have to admit our fault, modify it and try not to do it again.That is the way we are really to be great. >> That is the way to being really great.