Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't know the meaning exactly. But I can guess it.
I agree It is difficult to learn all things good to know.
It's impossible to learn everything that is good or bad.
And I also think it is not important to learn all.
The most crucial thing is how use our knowledge to the right direction for the people.
Good knowledge is not much amount but is more beneficial for someone.
강사 첨삭
Hello, JiYeon! ^_^
Thank you very much for still doing your best to write an essay even if you were not able to fully understand the question.
I applaud you for that. I am proud of you too.
Having the desire to discover the unknown is the exact definition of an intelligent person.
Intelligent people are constantly curious.
They don\'t stop until they get the correct answer.
I hope you are doing great.
See you again on Wednesday.
Take care.
~Teacher Charry :)
I don\'t know the meaning exactly. But I can guess it.
>> I don\'t know the meaning exactly but I can guess it.
OR >> I don\'t exactly know what it means but I can guess it.I agree It is difficult to learn all things good to know.
>> I agree that it is difficult to learn all things that are good to know.It\'s impossible to learn everything that is good or bad.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Learning everything that is good or bad is impossible. And I also think it is not important to learn all.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> And I also think it is not important to learn everything.The most crucial thing is how use our knowledge to the right direction for the people.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> What matters is how we use our knowledge to the right direction for the benefit of others. Good knowledge is not much amount but is more beneficial for someone.
>> [Do you mean]: Good knowledge does not amount much to some but it is beneficial for others.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.