Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task!
Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences.
Would you give up all of your "first world" perks, to live in a third world country but be happy?
If I live with happiness in a third world, I think I can give up the perks.
I think it is not point “what I give-up” but “what I choose for my happiness”.
It is simple and clear question. I will take my happiness rather than care about the location.
For example, in india, there are so many happy people even though they cannot take lots of perks compared with people who live in advanced country.
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Writing task!Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences.Would you give up all of your \"first world\" perks, to live in a third world country but be happy?If I live with happiness in a third world, I think I can give up the perks.
>>correctI think it is not point “what I give-up” but “what I choose for my happiness”.
>>I think the point here is my happiness.It is simple and clear question.
>>It is a simple and clear question.
OR: It is simple and clear.
I will take my happiness rather than care about the location.
>>correctFor example, in india, there are so many happy people even though they cannot take lots of perks compared with people who live in advanced country.
>>correct (Observe the proper name of the country India)
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