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2016-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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If you could invite five people to a dinner party, who would they be? What is each guest like? I will invite my husband's two brothers, their wives and my husband's sister. We will eat Samgyupsal(pork). My husband's siblings live near my house. They are very active and humorous. So when we meet we feel happy. When my mother in law lived in my house, we met almost once in a week. But now we don't.

강사 첨삭


Hi Hwa Shin! ^^

Happy happy Monday! ^^


Here we go again with another beautiful start of the week.

I hope that you had a good weekend. Thank you for answering this homework

despite your other priorities. Keep it up^^


See you in class^^

Teacher Glenda^^


Here are my corrections:

If you could invite five people to a dinner party, who would they be? What is
each guest like?

 I will invite my husband\'s two brothers, their wives and my husband\'s sister.

>> Correct
 We will eat Samgyupsal(pork).

>> Correct
 My husband\'s siblings live near my house. They are very active and humorous.

>> Correct

or

>> My husband\'s siblings live near our house. They are very active and humorous.
So when we meet we feel happy.

>> Correct

or

>> So when we meet we are all happy.
 When my mother in law lived in my house, we met almost once in a week.
But now we don\'t.

>> Correct

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