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2016-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Charry Hello. I am happy doing my homework. Thank for give a material to think. This gives me good opportunity expanding my thought in English. You can no more win a war than you can win an earthquake." I can this sentence. But I don't know exactly meaning. I guess the meaning is Human being is impotence of the mother nature. Life is sometimes way of happy But most life is struggle. When we are in bed at night, we feel safe we can do well during of day. We have tried to get more and more and clime a higher mountain. But We get better things, we still can't satisfy our statue. Nature is most great exist. An earthquake can sweep everything that human made for a long time. We know in front of nature we are how small things are. That's the reason we have to stay modest.

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Hello there, JiYeon! ^_^ I\'m so happy to know that  you find inspiration to widen/expand your thoughts in English through our homework. I think you have good thoughts and opinions. I encourage you to continue practicing and sharpening your writing skills. It will be very helpful for you later on when you decide to work in an English-speaking country so carry on! ^_~ I agree to your opinion when you said we are nothing compared to the forces of nature and once nature decides to take its revenge on us, all that we have worked hard for could be easily wiped out. That\'s why we have to take care of our environment. Anyhow, that is my opinion in relation to this topic. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again tomorrow. ^_^ ~Teacher Charry CharryHello. >> Hello, Charry. I am happy doing my homework.>> CORRECT! OR >> I feel happy doing my homework. Thank for give a material to think. >> Thanks for giving me something to think about. This gives me good opportunity expanding my thought in English.>> This gives me a good opportunity in expanding my thoughts in English.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- \"You can no more win a war than you can win an earthquake.\" I can this sentence. But I don\'t know exactly meaning. >> [Do you mean]: I understand this sentence but I don\'t exactly know its meaning.I guess the meaning is Human being is impotence of the mother nature. >> I guess this means that human beings will not survive without mother nature. Life is sometimes way of happy But most life is struggle. >> Life is sometimes happy but it\'s full of struggles.When we are in bed at night, we feel safe we can do well during of day. >> [Do you mean]: When we are in bed at night, we feel safe because we accomplished everything during the day.We have tried to get more and more and clime a higher mountain. >> We have tried to climb higher mountains. But We get better things, we still can\'t satisfy our statue.>> But even if we get better things, we are still unsatisfied. Nature is most great exist. >> Natures\' existence is great. An earthquake can sweep everything that human made for a long time. >> An earthquake can sweep everything that humans made for a long time. We know in front of nature we are how small things are. >> We know that compared to the force of nature, we are nothing. OR >> We know that we are smaller than the forces of nature. That\'s the reason we have to stay modest. >> That\'s the reason why we have to stay modest.

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