homework

Hi Hwa Shin^^

A magnificent Tuesday evening to you^^

I would totally agree with you. Without war, we can never know what peace means.

It maybe an evil thing that can happen among humanity but it is when people

would unite and strive for peace.

Good job on your opinion ^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Write about something ugly ; war, fear, hate, or cruelty;but find
the beauty (silver lining) in it.

 War is absolute evil. 

>> Correct
 War must be never happened. 

>> War must never happen.
 War must disappear in the world.

>> Correct

 But because of war we cherish peace time.

>> Correct

or

>> But because of war, we know how to cherish peace.
 Without war we won\'t know the importance of our ordinary life.

>> Correct