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Creative Writing: Success changes people - what do you think?
I perfectly agree of this opinion that success changes people because I think the position makes character of person. If a guy whose job is cleaner become a CEO of big multinational cleaning company. His attutude is not same with the days when he works as cleaner.
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Good evening, Jacob!^^
Happy Wednesday! :)
I get your point.^^ Change is inevitable, something you cannot avoid.
You can either change for the better or the opposite.
Your disposition may change.
I also appreciate that you provided an example.
You did a good job. See you later in class!^_^
_T. Mayleen_
I perfectly agree of this opinion that success changes people because I think the position makes character of person.
>> I perfectly agree that success changes people because status influences one\'s character.
If a guy whose job is cleaner become a CEO of big multinational cleaning company.
>> For instance, a guy who used to be a cleaner or janitor becomes a CEO of a multinational cleaning company.
His attutude is not same with the days when he works as cleaner.
>> His attitude won\'t be the same as to when he was still a cleaner.
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