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2016-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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How do you feel about the Kcurrent situation of your country? Would you think it's about time for your president to step down of her position? Why or why not? As you heard on the news, it is very big and political issue in Korea. For me, I have heard a lot of news from TV and radio and so on. And korean prosecutor are inspecting that case. I think it is not good that big issue is related the president like that kind of thing. If there are sin from the president, it is right to step dowm of her position.

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Hi m dear great job! Thank you so much for doing great! I hope you will keep up the good work... Take care and have a good night!^^ xoxoTeacher Cam^^ How do you feel about the Kcurrent situation of your country?Would you think it\'s about time for your president to step down of her position? Why or why not?As you heard on the news, it is very big and political issue in Korea. >>correctFor me, I have heard a lot of news from TV and radio and so on.>>correctAnd korean prosecutor are inspecting that case. >>And the Korean prosecutor is inspecting that case. I think it is not good that big issue is related the president like that kind of thing. >>correct OR: I think it\'s not good to have an issue regarding the president. If there are sin from the president, it is right to step dowm of her position. >>If the president committed some crime, she needs to step down of her position.

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