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2016-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences. What would you buy if you were given $1000 by a really generous millionaire, but you must spend it within the next 5 minutes? If I have to spend $1000 within the next 5 minutes, I would buy good stock. Because it is very short time, so after getting the stocks and then I will consider where I spend that money slowly. When I take this question, I thought that I would like to save $1000 on my account. Maybe I will do that by selling the stock for the future.

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Hi there my dear [이름]! Thank you so much for sending in your homework. You did very good! Keep up the good work... Call you again and take care! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Answer the following hypothetical question in NOT more than 5 sentences.What would you buy if you were given $1000 by a really generous millionaire, but you must spend it within the next 5 minutes?If I have to spend $1000 within the next 5 minutes, I would buy good stock. >>correctBecause it is very short time, so after getting the stocks and then I will consider where I spend that money slowly. >>Because I can consider where I spent the money in a short span of time. When I take this question, I thought that I would like to save $1000 on my account. >>correct Maybe I will do that by selling the stock for the future. >>correct

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