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Years ago, there was a popular TV drama that dealt with an unrealistic story.
In the drama, a young female resident died from a car accident.
And she was mysteriously alive and her life was moved to the Joseon Dynasty period.
She naturally became a very famous doctor who performed many kinds of surgeries using a knife.
Until then, no one have never used a knife to treat patients.
However, it seems much more impressive to me that this subject is reminiscent of the book "Gulliver's Travels" which my late father bought for me a long time ago.
I read it all night because the strange story really intrigued me.
If I could go back to the past way far from now, I would become the very Gulliver in Lilliput where people were less than 6 inches tall.
I could become a seer or a prophet and exert my capabilities like a female doctor who I mentioned above.
If I could go to the future way far from now, I could not get a job there because I fell behind the times.
I might become homeless.
There might be nothing I can do because of various kinds of robots and AI.
All things considered, I prefer to go back to the past rather than go to the future.
강사 첨삭
Whew! I would like to go back to the times when there were no smartphones and real interaction was the source of people\'s
happiness^^
Nowadays, our happiness has become more complicated to achieve TT
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Years ago, there was a popular TV drama that dealt with an unrealistic story.
>>CORRECT!In the drama, a young female resident died from a car accident.
>>CORRECT!And she was mysteriously alive and her life was moved to the Joseon Dynasty period.
>>CORRECT!
>>And she was mysteriously alive and transported to the Joseon Dynasty period.She naturally became a very famous doctor who performed many kinds of surgeries using a knife.
>>CORRECT!Until then, no one have never used a knife to treat patients.
>>Until then, no one had ever used a knife to treat patients.However, it seems much more impressive to me that this subject is reminiscent of the book \"Gulliver\'s Travels\" which my late father bought for me a long time ago.
>>CORRECT!I read it all night because the strange story really intrigued me.
>>CORRECT!If I could go back to the past way far from now, I would become the very Gulliver in Lilliput where people were less than 6 inches tall.>>CORRECT!
I could become a seer or a prophet and exert my capabilities like a female doctor who I mentioned above.
>>I could become a seer or a prophet and exert my capabilities like the female doctor who I mentioned above.If I could go to the future way far from now, I could not get a job there because I fell behind the times.
>>CORRECT!I might become homeless.
>>CORRECT!There might be nothing I can do because of various kinds of robots and AI.
>>CORRECT!All things considered, I prefer to go back to the past rather than go to the future.
>>CORRECT!
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