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2016-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Years ago, there was a popular TV drama that dealt with an unrealistic story. In the drama, a young female resident died from a car accident. And she was mysteriously alive and her life was moved to the Joseon Dynasty period. She naturally became a very famous doctor who performed many kinds of surgeries using a knife. Until then, no one have never used a knife to treat patients. However, it seems much more impressive to me that this subject is reminiscent of the book "Gulliver's Travels" which my late father bought for me a long time ago. I read it all night because the strange story really intrigued me. If I could go back to the past way far from now, I would become the very Gulliver in Lilliput where people were less than 6 inches tall. I could become a seer or a prophet and exert my capabilities like a female doctor who I mentioned above. If I could go to the future way far from now, I could not get a job there because I fell behind the times. I might become homeless. There might be nothing I can do because of various kinds of robots and AI. All things considered, I prefer to go back to the past rather than go to the future.

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Whew! I would like to go back to the times when there were no smartphones and real interaction was the source of people\'s happiness^^ Nowadays, our happiness has become more complicated to achieve TT Thank you for submitting your homework, Sir! Have a great day~ Years ago, there was a popular TV drama that dealt with an unrealistic story. >>CORRECT!In the drama, a young female resident died from a car accident. >>CORRECT!And she was mysteriously alive and her life was moved to the Joseon Dynasty period. >>CORRECT! >>And she was mysteriously alive and transported to the Joseon Dynasty period.She naturally became a very famous doctor who performed many kinds of surgeries using a knife. >>CORRECT!Until then, no one have never used a knife to treat patients. >>Until then, no one had ever used a knife to treat patients.However, it seems much more impressive to me that this subject is reminiscent of the book \"Gulliver\'s Travels\" which my late father bought for me a long time ago. >>CORRECT!I read it all night because the strange story really intrigued me. >>CORRECT!If I could go back to the past way far from now, I would become the very Gulliver in Lilliput where people were less than 6 inches tall.>>CORRECT! I could become a seer or a prophet and exert my capabilities like a female doctor who I mentioned above. >>I could become a seer or a prophet and exert my capabilities like the female doctor who I mentioned above.If I could go to the future way far from now, I could not get a job there because I fell behind the times. >>CORRECT!I might become homeless. >>CORRECT!There might be nothing I can do because of various kinds of robots and AI. >>CORRECT!All things considered, I prefer to go back to the past rather than go to the future. >>CORRECT!

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