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I am not fond of imaging something that can never happen in my life.
However, it seems intriguing and useful that I think of who really needs $ 1 million right now.
Firstly, how about a poor old aged couple?
Their son and daughter are also very poor, so they have never helped their parents after marriage.
The old husband has been seriously sick for years so that the old woman has had to work to survive picking used bottles, thick paper and old iron pieces.
She makes money only $ 5 a day at best.
The couple have to just rely on an electric mattress in the winter because they can't afford to buy other means.
I wish Santa sends them the money.
Secondly, how about astronomical poor children in the Middle East and Africa, who are starving?
About ten dollars could revive a life for a month.
I wish Santa sends them the money.
Lastly, how about a poor family who is going to commit suicide together?
The family consists of three members, such as an abandoned mother who is very sick, a disabled son who can never work, and a uneducated daughter who has earned money so far but got hurt severely and can't work any more.
I wish Santa gives them the money.
I feel a little satisfied right now.
강사 첨삭
Amidst selfish desires while imagining what to do with $ 1 M dollars, I am so happy that there are people like you who still think of others, Sir [이름]^^ Thank you for doing this and may you have more blessings to receive before the year ends^^
I am not fond of imaging something that can never happen in my life.
>>I am not fond of imagining something that can never happen in my life.However, it seems intriguing and useful that I think of who really needs $ 1 million right now.
>>CORRECT!Firstly, how about a poor old aged couple?
>>Firstly, how about a poor old-aged couple?Their son and daughter are also very poor, so they have never helped their parents after marriage.
>>CORRECT!The old husband has been seriously sick for years so that the old woman has had to work to survive picking used bottles, thick paper and old iron pieces.
>>The old husband has been seriously sick for years so that the old woman has to work to survive picking used bottles, thick paper and old iron pieces.She makes money only $ 5 a day at best.
>>She only makes an amount of $ 5 a day at best.The couple have to just rely on an electric mattress in the winter because they can\'t afford to buy other means.
>>CORRECT!I wish Santa sends them the money.
>>CORRECT!Secondly, how about astronomical poor children in the Middle East and Africa, who are starving?
>>Secondly, how about the poor children in the Middle East and Africa, who are starving? (Sir, kindly clarify the word \"astronomical\")About ten dollars could revive a life for a month.
>>CORRECT!I wish Santa sends them the money.
>>CORRECT!Lastly, how about a poor family who is going to commit suicide together?
>>CORRECT!The family consists of three members, such as an abandoned mother who is very sick, a disabled son who can never work, and a uneducated daughter who has earned money so far but got hurt severely and can\'t work any more.
>>The family consists of three members, such as an abandoned mother who is very sick, a disabled son who can never work, and an uneducated daughter who has earned money so far but got hurt severely and can\'t work any more.I wish Santa gives them the money.
>>CORRECT!I feel a little satisfied right now.
>>CORRECT!
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