homework
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Creative writing: Bill Watterson said: "Weekends don't count unless you spend them doing something completely pointless." Do you agree?
=> I disagree about the opinion that Bill Watterson said. I think he ignored the function of resting and refreshing. It is good for one's health too.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jacob!^^
Happy Monday! (^___^)
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I respect your opinion. I, too, prefers to stay at home and sleep all day on weekends, at times.
However, doing something that is not a part of daily routines is also good.
You get to enjoy, learn, and explore.^_^
See you later in class! :)
_T. Mayleen ^_-
I disagree about the opinion that Bill Watterson said.
>> I disagree with Bill Watterson\'s opinion.
I think he ignored the function of resting and refreshing.
>> Correct!
OR: I think he forgot the importance of taking a break or relaxing.
It is good for one\'s health too.
>> It is good for one\'s health, too.
Happy Monday! (^___^)
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I respect your opinion. I, too, prefers to stay at home and sleep all day on weekends, at times.
However, doing something that is not a part of daily routines is also good.
You get to enjoy, learn, and explore.^_^
See you later in class! :)
_T. Mayleen ^_-
I disagree about the opinion that Bill Watterson said.
>> I disagree with Bill Watterson\'s opinion.
I think he ignored the function of resting and refreshing.
>> Correct!
OR: I think he forgot the importance of taking a break or relaxing.
It is good for one\'s health too.
>> It is good for one\'s health, too.
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