HOMEWORK
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I know that in our society, unfortunately, materialism reigns TT
Sometimes, they forget that it\'s the thought that truly counts. ^^
I still remember the gift that my parents bought for me about 50 years ago.
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It was a small, pretty girl doll in a glass box.
>> It was a pretty, small girl doll in a glass box.
My parents might have thought that entering the high school at the top of alumni deserved it.
>> My parents might have thought that entering high school at the top of alumni deserved it.
It also meant a lot to me because I had never received that kind of expensive gift from anyone before.
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A few factors should be met for being special gifts.
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First of all, gifts should be meaningful things of acknowledgement, compensation and celebration for someone.
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We seem so satisfied with the gifts that we really wanted to receive, regardless of their prices.
>> We seem so satisfied with the gifts that we really wanted to receive them, regardless of their prices.
Timing is also considered as an essential factor when we send our gifts.
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In general, unexpected precious gifts make us so excited.
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However, as there is a clear difference between an email and a letter, some gifts that someone made efforts are priceless
and special.
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Nowadays in our society, gifts or presents have been replaced by cash and gift vouchers.
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It is regretful that gifts keep alive among the children\'s birthday parties.
>> It is regretful that gifts keep children\'s birthday parties alive.
>> It is regretful that gifts keep children alive during children\'s birthday parties.
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