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Good morning, Sir [이름]^^
Knowing that there are still people who care really impresses me.
Keep on having that big heart of yours, see you^^
I was actively involved in an organization which was guided by our teacher in high school.
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The organization has still been lively operated in Korean communities across the world as a NGO(non-governmental organization) since its foundation in the Japanese colonial period a long time ago.
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The cause is to follow a late patriot\'s thoughts which emphasized Korean people\'s mind reform.
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However, after entering KMA, I could\'t continue the activities in the NGO because of political neutralization in the army.
>>However, after entering KMA, I couldn\'t continue the activities in the NGO because of political neutralization in the army.
The term \'NGO\' is also called NPO(Nonprofit Organization) in other countries.
>>The term \'NGO\' is also called NPO(non-profit Organization) in other countries.
Their activities might include human rights, environmental, improving health, or development work.
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Right now, I am not involved in any NGO.
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However, I don\'t think I am not actively involved in promoting and supporting a cause.
>> However, I think I am actively involved in promoting and supporting a cause.
Since I was born a Christian, I have been devoting myself to not only evangelizing but also helping the weak and poor through prayers, offerings and
some activities.
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