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We can be at odds with a closest friend over trivial things.
We often meet not a few old aged people who are abruptly angry at others.
Sometimes the old people's reactions are not explicable because they lose their temper towards themselves .
In general, getting hurt by someone emotionally is stemmed from our disappointment about someone's behavior which is below a certain level.
How do I make myself feel better after a bad day?
I still remember a chaplain's sermon in the army a long time ago.
A couple promised each other that if he felt depressed after a bad day, she had to try to encourage him after discerning his hat tilted, and if she felt unhappy after a hard work, he had to try to comfort her after discerning the picture frame tilted on the front wall.
I usually concentrate on workout to make myself feel better such as playing indoor golf, taking a walk, and so on.
When my Rookie runs towards me wagging his tail with his face smiled, my egregiously bad feeling just melts away.
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I remember watching my dog\'s videos when I feel bad.
It is indeed great when we release our stress in productive manners^^
See you tomorrow, Sir!
Every person has a We can be at odds with a closest friend over trivial things.
>>CORRECT!
We often meet not a few old aged people who are abruptly angry at others.
We often meet not a few old aged people who are abruptly angry at others.
>>We often meet a few old-aged people who get angry at others abruptly.
Sometimes the old people\'s reactions are not explicable because they lose their temper towards themselves.
Sometimes the old people\'s reactions are not explicable because they lose their temper towards themselves.
>>CORRECT!
In general, getting hurt by someone emotionally is stemmed from our disappointment about someone\'s behavior which is below a certain level.
>>CORRECT!
In general, getting hurt by someone emotionally is stemmed from our disappointment about someone\'s behavior which is below a certain level.
>>CORRECT!
How do I make myself feel better after a bad day?
>>CORRECT!
I still remember a chaplain\'s sermon in the army a long time ago.
I still remember a chaplain\'s sermon in the army a long time ago.
>>CORRECT!
A couple promised each other that if he felt depressed after a bad day, she had to try to encourage him after discerning his hat tilted, and if she felt unhappy after a hard work, he had to try to comfort her after discerning the picture frame tilted on the front wall.
A couple promised each other that if he felt depressed after a bad day, she had to try to encourage him after discerning his hat tilted, and if she felt unhappy after a hard work, he had to try to comfort her after discerning the picture frame tilted on the front wall.
>>CORRECT!
I usually concentrate on workout to make myself feel better such as playing indoor golf, taking a walk, and so on.
I usually concentrate on workout to make myself feel better such as playing indoor golf, taking a walk, and so on.
>>CORRECT!
When my Rookie runs towards me wagging his tail with his face smiled, my egregiously bad feeling just melts away.
When my Rookie runs towards me wagging his tail with his face smiled, my egregiously bad feeling just melts away.
>>CORRECT!
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