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2016-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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We can be at odds with a closest friend over trivial things. We often meet not a few old aged people who are abruptly angry at others. Sometimes the old people's reactions are not explicable because they lose their temper towards themselves . In general, getting hurt by someone emotionally is stemmed from our disappointment about someone's behavior which is below a certain level. How do I make myself feel better after a bad day? I still remember a chaplain's sermon in the army a long time ago. A couple promised each other that if he felt depressed after a bad day, she had to try to encourage him after discerning his hat tilted, and if she felt unhappy after a hard work, he had to try to comfort her after discerning the picture frame tilted on the front wall. I usually concentrate on workout to make myself feel better such as playing indoor golf, taking a walk, and so on. When my Rookie runs towards me wagging his tail with his face smiled, my egregiously bad feeling just melts away.

강사 첨삭

I remember watching my dog\'s videos when I  feel bad.
It is indeed great when we release our stress in productive manners^^
See you tomorrow, Sir!
Every person has a We can be at odds with a closest friend over trivial things.
>>CORRECT!
We often meet not a few old aged people who are abruptly angry at others.
>>We often meet a few old-aged people who get angry at others abruptly.
Sometimes the old people\'s reactions are not explicable because they lose their temper towards themselves.
>>CORRECT!
In general, getting hurt by someone emotionally is stemmed from our disappointment about someone\'s behavior which is below a certain level.
>>CORRECT!
How do I make myself feel better after a bad day?
>>CORRECT!
I still remember a chaplain\'s sermon in the army a long time ago.
>>CORRECT!
A couple promised each other that if he felt depressed after a bad day, she had to try to encourage him after discerning his hat tilted, and if she felt unhappy after a hard work, he had to try to comfort her after discerning the picture frame tilted on the front wall. 
>>CORRECT!
I usually concentrate on workout to make myself feel better such as playing indoor golf, taking a walk, and so on.
>>CORRECT!
When my Rookie runs towards me wagging his tail with his face smiled, my egregiously bad feeling just melts away.
>>CORRECT!

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