homework.(7.10)

2014-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I think that they reapply not only elderly drivers but also young drivers. People aren't perfect like machines. people body may go from bad to worse. To cause a traffic accident, another man will be able to hurt. so it's neccessary to get check-up.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Eddie! Thank you for your composition today! You\'re right, people aren\'t perfect, so they need to be checked to prevent troubles from happening. Take care and have a happy Friday! T. JanE ^^ I think that they reapply not only elderly drivers but also young drivers.>> I think that elderly drivers, as well as young drivers, need to reapply for a license.  People aren\'t perfect like machines. people body may go from bad to worse.>> People aren\'t perfect like machines, so their body may go from bad to worse.  To cause a traffic accident, another man will be able to hurt.>> In a traffic accident, other people might get hurt.  so it\'s neccessary to get check-up. >> So it\'s necessary to get a check-up.   

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