Homework 7

2020-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. Would you rather have an easy job working for someone else or work for yourself but work incredibly hard? A. I prefer an easy job woking for someone else. When I was young, I thought I want to work for myself as I can have a sense of achievement, even though it is incredibly hard. But as getting old and having experiences, I feel like working easier job for anyone else as long as I can be helpful to them. And I began to pay attention to myself such as my health, hobby, and my family. For me it\'s better to have enough time to spend after work and on the weekend. If I had to work even on the weekend, I would be stressed very much. And working for others is worthwhile as well as working for myself. I think it depends on what part of work we focus on.

강사 첨삭

Hi Bomi! Thank you for doing your homework and spending a little time on it. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Nice thoughts you have here. You really actually know what you want and that is good. But for me, I prefer working for myself as I can manage my time while fulfilling my dreams for financial independence. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

I prefer an easy job woking for someone else. 
>>CORRECT
When I was young, I thought I want to work for myself as I can have a sense of achievement, even though it is incredibly hard. 
>>CORRECT
But as getting old and having experiences, I feel like working easier job for anyone else as long as I can be helpful to them. 
>>But as I was maturing and gaining experiences, I feel like working for someone else is a lot easier and I can be helpful to them as well.
And I began to pay attention to myself such as my health, hobby, and my family. 
>>CORRECT
For me it\'s better to have enough time to spend after work and on the weekend. 
>>CORRECT
If I had to work even on the weekend, I would be stressed very much. 
>>CORRECT
And working for others is worthwhile as well as working for myself. 
>>CORRECT
I think it depends on what part of work we focus on.
>>CORRECT

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