Homework(7/11): Completing sentences

2016-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear sam. Thanks for your encouragement today. I also agree with your thought that sometimes we grow greedy because of the things we need in order to survive. and i will keep it in mind that one must listen to the other person's words and engage in communication on what the other person is speaking about. I always try to do so but it's too difficult skill. i did my homework too late because i was very busy due to error of our system. Now, 5 o'clock p.m, all problems were completely solved. See you on Wed. sam. = body = 1. Everyone loves Ruby because of her amiable nature. 2. You must resist the temptation to give unsolicited advice. 3. One of the main problems pervading third world countries is unemployment. 4. The boy was reluctant to admit his guilt. 5. It has been more than five years since Rani met her parents. Now she is longing to see them.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Oh!!!

I do hope that this activity can help you learn more about English. I recommend you to write more and express yourself more.

Have a great time and enjoy!!!

T. Jeny

 

Dear sam.

>>correct
Thanks for your encouragement today.

>>correct
I also agree with your thought that sometimes we grow greedy because of the things we need in order to survive.

>>correct
and i will keep it in mind that one must listen to the other person\'s words and engage in communication on what the other person is speaking about.

>>and i will keep it in mind that one must listen to the other person\'s words and engage in communication on what the other person is talking about.

I always try to do so but it\'s too difficult skill.

>>I always try to do so but it\'s a difficult skill.
i did my homework too late because i was very busy due to error of our system.

>>I did my homework too late because I was very busy due to an error on our system.
Now, 5 o\'clock p.m, all problems were completely solved.

>>It\'s 5 o\'clock p.m now and all of the problems were completely solved.
See you on Wed. sam.

>>correct
= body =
1. Everyone loves Ruby because of her amiable nature.
>>correct
2. You must resist the temptation to give unsolicited advice.
>>correct
3. One of the main problems pervading third world countries is unemployment.
>>One of the main problems afflicting third world countries is unemployment.
4. The boy was reluctant to admit his guilt.
>>correct
5. It has been more than five years since Rani met her parents. Now she is longing to see them.

>>correct

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