Homework 7/12

Hello!

Thanks for finding time to make your composition. I appreciate every drop of effort you put into it.

I revised some of your sentences, I hope you will find them useful.

Anyway, have a great time and take care.

~Teacher Eunice~

-> First of all, it can be decreased the young people in the farming area.

>> First of all, it can decrease the population of young people in a farming area.

Then, that area will be short-handed more and more.

>> Then, that area will be short-handed even more.

And also it\'s hard to see the children there.

>> Correct

Secondly, the city would be more complicated due to the increasing people.

>> Secondly, the city would be more complicated due to the increasing number of the population people.

Also, a lot of problems must be occurred such as air pollution, traffic jam and housing problem,etc.

>>Also, a lot of problems must be occurred such as air pollution, traffic jam and housing problem, etc.

How can we solve these problems? I think they have to make some policy for someone who decides to live in farming area.

>>How can we solve these problems? I think they have to make some policies for someone who decides to live in a farming area.

For example, reducing their tax, making many programs to the people can live in the area well and then teaching to them.

>> For example, reducing their tax, making many programs for the people so that they can live in the area well and then teaching them.