Homework 7/14

Hello [이름]!

I am not familiar with the song but I think I\'m liking it now. hahaha. Thank you for taking some time to do your composition. I do appreciate it!

Here are my corrections!

See you!

~T. Eunice

   
-> The name of my intro music is \"Run\" which is that \"SES\"\'s song.

>> The name of my intro music is \"Run\" which is one of the \"SES\"\' song.

It is very old song.

>> It is a very old song.  

I\'m not sure when this song came out first.

>> I\'m not sure when was this song first came out.

But, When I was high school student I heard it many times.

>> But, I heard it many times when I was a high school student.

The reason why I like it so much, first of all, the lyrics are very nice ans hopeful.

>> The reason why I like it so much is that, first of all, the lyrics are very nice and hopeful.

So, I can get some power during hard studying and I can hope my bright future. In addition, the melody is awesome and pretty.

>> So, I can get some motivation while studying hard and while I am hoping for a bright future. In addition, the melody is awesome and pretty.

Therefore, When I feel sad or terrible, I turn this song on immediately and listen, then my feeling becomes better than before.

>> Therefore, when I feel sad or terrible, I turn this music on immediately and listen to it then my feeling becomes better than before.