Homework 7.16
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you best motivated? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
: My best motivation is the desire for winning. Actually, I started studying hard because I want to become a student (or friend) who is very smart. I mean I want to be considered smart. Of course, I know many knowledges that we learn in school are helpful in our future. So I will try my best to get good score in high school.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Michelle. You did a great job with your homework. T[이름]k you for sharing your thoughts on the topic. I wish you the best as you keep achieving your goals and making new ones. I bet you will just keep getting better as a person and as a student. Good luck! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
My best motivation is the desire for winning.
>> CORRECT =)
Actually, I started studying hard because I want to become a student (or friend) who is very smart.
>> CORRECT =)
I mean I want to be considered smart.
>> CORRECT =)
Of course, I know many knowledges that we learn in school are helpful in our future.
>> Of course, I know the huge amount of knowledge that we learn in school is helpful in our future.
So I will try my best to get good score in high school.
>> So I will try my best to get good scores in high school.
My best motivation is the desire for winning.
>> CORRECT =)
Actually, I started studying hard because I want to become a student (or friend) who is very smart.
>> CORRECT =)
I mean I want to be considered smart.
>> CORRECT =)
Of course, I know many knowledges that we learn in school are helpful in our future.
>> Of course, I know the huge amount of knowledge that we learn in school is helpful in our future.
So I will try my best to get good score in high school.
>> So I will try my best to get good scores in high school.
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